Meebs's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ouch that hurts]

This was so good...

Dude, before the alphabet song, I didn't really appreciate your work because (no offense) robotbox and cactus was my least favorite keentoon.
(But that's probably just me not watching enough of it, because "I like talking loud, I like making noise is still a favorite quote of mine.

But now, I can see you have great animation, not to mention an amazing use of color (I really like the tones you use) and an awesome sense of humor.

KEEP ROCKING OUT, I'm adding this and you to my favorites.

[Japanimation Guy PI]

Just some criticism.

First I want to say, good job, it was pretty good.
The humor was there, I'm sure many will like it.

But there are some things you need to work on. I could tell your drawing skills are actually pretty good, however you need to work on your actual animation skills.
Lip loops are alright, I use them alot, but they have to be a little more realistic. No just solid mouth opens. Experiment and figure out how to do them well, I generally use them for long lines from one person but make sure I finish the line syncing it, so it actually looks right.

Other than that, I can't really complain, your drawing was pretty good and just keep practicing.

[Brushed*2]

Awesome job guys!

Everything was great, including the menus and credits, splendid job there.

I'm so sorry I kind of bailed out on this one and went unactive, but I see you guys did great without me so no harm done!
I liked junkycow's part alot, but they were all cool.

Great job!

Daj responds:

I really do wish you had completed your part, it started out looking good. :D
maybe next one?

thanks :D

[Cool Court]

PERFECT

You want to know why?
I LOVE all your other cartoons, and alot of them make me laugh hard, but when I saw the Lochness monster, who then proceeded to pole dance...goddamnit, I was on the floor.

I was hoping another of your cartoons would be coming out soon, and I was right.
I was also expecting it to end pretty early because sometimes your songs are short and sweet, but the fact that the song was longer just made it even better.

I can't wait to show this to my cousin who is also a marc m enthusiast.
you rock.

[Wii-mote: Crime Deterrent]

good work.

BUT, you need to some how not have it be so slow.
and get a voice actor or a better mic because the sound quality was not very good.

I was going to vote a poor score, but you made up for it with some fairly nice fbf.
I voted 3.
Keep up the good work.

kdTaz99 responds:

i'm still a Flash noob, for the most part... and that's my voice, i couldn't get anyone else... heh.

[Bling to the Future]

Looking forward to the next episode!

Man, I haven't been interested in your stuff for awhile, but that was great.
Can't wait till the next ep, this one was genuinely funny.

My favorite part was "5 golden rings!"

[Akira the Don - Hypocrite]

Good

There was just so much there.
Congratulations, just on the fact that there was so much content.
And it looked pretty good, some character art was attractive.

Good Work.

Wonchop responds:

Hehe yeep

[Zelda's Musical Story]

I'm sorry...

I want to put this as nice as possible:

The song has been done to death, and you didn't really add anything to it.
The use of a character singing was nice, but you used all images you didn't even make and just tweened them.

That is not animation.The character was animation, and if the cartoon was more centered around him it would have been better. It was hard to watch him and concentrate on the cartoon. But I like that for your animation, you actually did some character work and lip syncing. Even though it has been done to death, I would have given you a better score if you actually animated something besides the character,and brought something new to it.
It would be pretty easy to beat legendary frog's and his is the best version out there.

In the constructive criticism side of things, you got a good score because people like the song, not because your cartoon was any beauty to watch. If you want to practice, that is great, I love seeing people practice, and creating whole cartoons is a great way. BUT, I do not reccomend submitting cartoons just of tweened images.
I say try doing some frame by frame cartoons, or if tweening is your way, make some nice character models and try animating a dialogue between two people.

I hope I could help :)

[Valentine '29]

AWESOME

Teehee this collab was a BLAST!
I loved being in this, and I am mainly reviewing the other people's parts because they were so good!

It's a shame the sound is screwed up on my part hehe...
Maybe fix it before it...
HITS FRONT PAGE!

AlmightyHans responds:

abd thanks for being a part of it Meebs ;)